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All little Charlie Bucket has ever wanted to do is visit the most wonderful, magnificent chocolate factory, which is so close to his home! Poor Charlie can only afford to have one chocolate bar a year after his whole family put all of their savings together.
He’s decided to write Mr Willy Wonka a very persuasive letter and awaits eagerly for his response.
Mr. Willy Wonka
1 Chocolate Avenue
Cocoa shire
CHO 3EE
Dear Mr. Willy Wonka,
I am writing to you because I would love to visit your magnificent chocolate factory. I love your mouthwatering chocolate bars, I relish the one bar I get a year. My whole family save their money just so I can taste one of your delicious chocolate bars. We would make a excellent team together. I am your biggest fan and I can’t stop thinking about your factory. In bed I always dream about coming to your chocolate factory. It would be a dream come true for me. We could make bars together and taste them. We could see if it would tantalise our taste buds. If you gave me one of your recipes I would keep it secret.
For all of the people that buy your chocolate bars in the shops they would have a surprise because together we could make different seasonal chocolate bars. We could be famous enough to go in magazines and newspapers. Everyday I walk past your chocolate factory I stop and stare at it. I take a deep breath and it fills my lungs with chocolate.
Your sincerely Charlie Bucket
Mr.Willy Wonka
1 Chocolate Avenue
Cocoa shire
CHO 3EE
Dear Mr.Willy Wonka
I am Charlie Bucket,I’m writing to you because my family is not wealthy at all. There is another five people that live with me in a small wooden hut with one bed.My family is desperate to come to you’re factory if I come to you’re factory I’ll keep you’re recipe safe like its in a safe.I relish one bar of chocolate a year,we would create several bars together.We will persuade more employees to work. The testing would be on me, if I come then It would be a pleasure to be you’re co-worker.
I would not contaminate you’re chocolate!
If I was successful my family would be grateful and maybe even get out of the bed they are always in and never get out of. Our factory would be dancing with joy,it would be more than a success. My family save for one marvellous creation just for me.
Yours sincerely
Charlie Bucket
Mr.Willy Wonka
1 Chocolate Avenue
Cocoa shire
CHO 3EE
Dear Mr Willy Wonka ,
I am writing to you because I would like to visit your Chocolate factory. I love your Chocolate bars also I am able to see your factory from my window, the whole of my family saves up money for a chocolate bar only for me. My family is poor. I am sure we would make a great team, everybody has a chocolate bar of yours nearly every day and I get once a year. We can make new inventions together. I am one of your biggest fans! Your factory is magnificent, I promise I will not give your recipes away also when I am on my way to school I press my nose against the glass and look at your chocolate bars also think your recipes are great.
Your sincerely Charlie Bucket
I love your letter,if I was Willy Wonka I definitely would invite you to my chocolate factory.
I love your letter,if I was Willy Wonka I definitely would invite you to my chocolate factory.
I love your letter,if I was Willy Wonka I definitely would invite you to my chocolate factory.
Mr.Willy Wonka
1Chocolate Avenue
Cocoa Shire
CHO 3EE
Dear Mr.Willy Wonka,
I am writing to you to ask if I could visit your amazing Chocolate Factory. I will be on my best behaviour. I really want to visit your Chocolate Factory because I am a massive fan of your chocolate. The taste of it is so milky and I relish the one bar I get. My family is not very wealthy so that’s why I only get one bar a year for my birthday. We could create a new chocolate bar together. We’d make the best team. I could test your fabulous new inventions and make sure they don’t break. You could show me how to make your chocolate. I promise I’ll keep it a secret.
Yours sincerely Charlie Bucket
Fantastic letter Amy I love the way you have persuaded Mr Willy Wonka to make you come to his factory.
Great work Amy if I were Willy Wonka I would let you come to my factory!
Mr Willy Wonka
1 Chocolate Avenue
Cocoa Shire
CHO 3EE
Dear Mr Willy Wonka ,
I am writing to you because I wish to visit your chocolate factory. I love your chocolate it is sweet and tasty. I relish one bar of your magnificent chocolate I get one a year. My hole family have to save up all there money just to taste one of your gorgeous chocolate bars. If I can come to your factory we can make new inventions. I am your biggest fan ! If I can come to your factory I promise I will keep your recipes a secret. When I come to your factory we can make a new chocolate bar and a new sparkling rapper for it.If I can come it would be a dream come true . If it is true your factory is amazing prove it to me .
People say you are academic at making chocolate so if you are show me how you are . If you do make a new invention with me it will make you more famous then you are now . When I come I could be another helper you know what they say more chocolate more money . If I come I will bring some cocoa beans for the chocolate. I will also listen to you and do what you say . When you let me come we could make different shapes of chocolate .
Your sincerely ,Charlie Bucket
Mr Willy Wonka
1chocolate Avenue
Cocoashire
Cho 3EE
Dear Mr Willy Wonka,
I’m writing to you because I would like to visit your extordernery factory. To me you are a hero of chocolate. You see my family is very poor so I only one creamy bar of chocolate a year.Evry day I relish my chocolate and hope for more. Watching other kids eating it is torture. I am your number one fan and pursanly I think we will make a great team to gether. I’ve got tuns of new designs for us to make. We will earn more money than you can dream of.
I will keep your recipes a secret and a nuther thing to say is l would love to meet your umperlumpers. It would be a massive opertunety for me. So that is why l would like to visit your factory.
Yours sincerely Charlie Bucket.
I like the way you think Willy Wonka is a hero of chocolate
Amazing adjectives Ash!✍
Mr.Willy Wonka
1Chocolate avenue
Cocoa shire
Cho 3EE
Dear Mr Willy Wonka
I am writing to you because I loved every single bar you have made.Also I’m your biggest fan,I would like to come to your factory because your bars are so different to other peoples chocolate bars.Also all my class mates tease me with caramel bars and saying that I’m poor so I cant get chocolate bars I really love your factory.I relish the one bar I get every single year.
My whole family saves all there money just for my birthday so I can taste one of your magnificent bars.I can make new inventions with you.
Your sincerely
Charlie Bucket
I’m convinced keep hoping!
Mrs Mary Kings
Linwood Road
Martin
Ln4 3RA
Mr Willy Wonka
1 Chocolate Avenue
Cocoa shire
CHO 3EE
Dear Mr Willy Wonka,
I am writing to you because I want to visit your fabulous fantastic factory.On my birthday my wonderful family save up all their money to by me 1 Chocolate bar a year.In the distance I imagine it’s mine.If you let me I we could make a new invention together.I will keep your recipe a secret.Me and my good natured family are poor.You are my biggest fan.If you let me in you’ll be my BFF.Me and you can make seasonal bars for terms.
,Yours sincerely, Charlie bucket
Mrs Mary Kings,
Linwood Road
Martin
LN4 3RA
Mr.Willy Wonka
1 chocolate Avenue
Cocoa shire
CHO 3EE
Dear Mr Willy Wonka,
I am writing to you because I have always wanted to go to your magnificent chocolate factory. All my family is poor so I only have one chocolate bar a year and that’s for my birthday! I’ve always wanted to be a helper of yours, if I was I wouldn’t tell anybody your recipe of your scrumptious chocolate bar. Together we can make new flavours like blueberry,raspberry and cherry . Your chocolate bars are scrumptious I’ve always been dreaming about your factory . People at school show of as they take away a chocolate bar from their pocket biting through the lovely chocolate bar rolling a piece around their mouth. I could help you taste new inventions I will tell you if it is scrumptious or horrible I know it will be scrumptious! Hope I get to go. I will help you with new inventions
Yours sincerely
Charlie Buckets
You had Good adjective, one example is scrumptious.
Mr. Willy Wonka
1 chocolate avenue
Cocoa shire
CHO 3EE
Dear Mr. Willy Wonka,
I am writing to you because I would love to have an amazing trip to your chocolate factory. I love you chocolate but I only get one a year(on my birthday). My whole family have to save up all there money just to buy one bar. Every time I stop to look at the mouth watering chocolate bars in the shop. We are defiantly not wealthy. We only have one bed and one mattress on the floor. W have six people in the wooden house. But we only have two rooms. For people in the bed and two people on the mattress. Anyway I love your bars and I would buy them if I had the money. My Grandad has told me lots stories about your magnificent inventions. We would make an extraordinary team.
I could help you make new inventions. If you are scared of me taking your recipes then you are wrong. I would keep them safe like it was my favourite thing. My family would love it if I got to go to your factory! I think they might even get out of bed. You could be even more famous by making more chocolate with me! I’m your biggest fan. Once I have met you I would be an even bigger fan.
Yours sincerely
Charlie bucket
Mr.Willy Wonka
1Chocolate Avenue
Cocoa shire
CHO 3EE
Dear Mr Willy Wonka,
I am writing to you because I really want to come to your factory and make chocolate with you . I love your chocolate bars. You and me can make a new bar. We will be a great team. I can help you with new inventions. We can make all kinds of chocolate. I want to make chocolate bars with you.
Yours sincerely Charlie bucket.
Mrs Mary kings
Linwood road
Martin
LN43RA
Mr Willy Wonka
1chocolate A venue
Cocoa shire
Cho 3EE
Dear Mr Willy Wonka
I am writing to you because I Want to go to your fabulous chocolate factory
Me and you could make a good team. I only get one chocolate a Year.
We could make different chocolate. We could make a inventions together
I am your biggest fan!
Yours Sincerely Charlie Bucket
You’re missing a full stop , otherwise it’s great.
It could be longer.
Niall your missing a full stop but good work anyway
Mrs Mary kings
Linwood Road
Martin
LN4 3RA
Mr Willy Wonka
1 chocolate Avenue
Cocoa shire
Cho 3EE
Dear Mr Willy Wonka ,
I am writing to you because I would love to come to your factory but I am very poor and it would be a dream come true.
I love your chocolate , I relish the one bar a year . We can keep your recipes a secret . Also we can make scrumptious chocolate together! My whole family save all their money, just so I can taste one of magnificent bars
We can make new things and make new sweets also we can taste the scrumptious chocolate that you make . I’m your biggest fan . We will make a new inventions together. I don’t have much money You and I can make chocolate bars for different seasons .
Your sincerely
By Charlie Buckets
Linwood Road
Martin
LN4 3RA
Mr.Willy Wonka
1 Chocolate Avenue
Cocoa shire
CHO 3EE
Dear Mr Willy Wonka,
I am writing to you because I would like to visit your huge chocolate factory only get one chocolate bar a year because we are very poor. When I get my first chocolate bar I save it for a month. My parents have to save up just for one chocolate bar. You a I can keep your flavours a secret without anyone knowing “Deal or no deal”
I would hope that you would come so famous that everyone would want to buy everyone of your chocolate bars. We will make new inventions together.
Your sincerely
Charlie bucket
Try not to put we and I so many times and do more discription
Mr Willy Wonka
1 Chocolate Avenue
Cocoa shire
CHO 3EE
Dear Willy Wonka,
I am writing to you because I would like to visit your Chocolate factory.You have lovely Chocolate bars.
I can help you by keeping your recipes a secret. We could make new Chocolate bars together.We could make Chocolate wrappers. We could test each Chocolate bar we make every time . I can help you get the Chocolate mousse from the Chocolate river.We will have fun as well . I am your biggest fan! I love your Chocolate,I relish the one bar I get a year.My family save all their money,just so I can taste one of your Magnificent bars.
New inventions will make you even more famous then you are now. You will be on the news,. I can help you make your factory more fashionable.
Yours Sincerely Charlie bucket
Mr Willy Wonka
1 Chocolate Avenue
Cocoa shire
CHO 3EE
Dear Willy Wonka,
I am writing to you because I would like to visit your Chocolate factory.You have lovely Chocolate bars.
I can help you by keeping your recipes a secret. We could make new Chocolate bars together.We could make Chocolate wrappers. We could test each Chocolate bar we make every time . I can help you get the Chocolate mousse from the Chocolate river.We will have fun as well . I am your biggest fan! I love your Chocolate,I relish the one bar I get a year.My family save all their money,just so I can taste one of your Magnificent bars.
New inventions will make you even more famous then you are now. You will be on the news,. I can help you make your factory more fashionable.
Yours Sincerely Charlie bucket
Try not to put we and I so many times and ore discription super letter
Mrs Mary Kings
Linwood Road
Martin
LN4 3RA
Mr.Willy Wonka
1Chocolate Avenue
Cocoa shire
CHO 3EE
Dear Mr.Willy Wonka
I am writing to you because I’d love to come to your factory,also I love your tantalising bars.Also I relish the one bar a year that I get.The only reason I get one is because my family is not wealthy.We are you’re biggest fans!We will make a perfect team for making different chocolate bars.If you let me come then I’ll be happy to not even know your recipes,if you do tell me I’ll always keep it to myself.As well as testing new inventions!please my parents won’t come as they can barely get out of bed.
I will not take your famousness because I have no idea how to make chocolate!So before I do come be prepared to show me your secrets.
Yours Sincerely
Charlie Bucket
Mrs Mary Kings Linwood Road
Martin
LN4 3RA
Mr Willy Wonka
1 chocolate Avenue
Cocoas hire
CHO 3EE
Dear Mr Willy Wonka,
I am writing to you because I would love to make chocolate bars at your chocolate Factory and I love your chocolate bars.
I want to come to your chocolate factory because it looks fun.I like chocolate very much and I am your biggest fan. I can. only try your chocolate bars every year.
Yours Sincerely
Charlie Bucket
Mr . Willy Wonka
1Chocolate
Cocoa Shire
CHO3EE
Dear Mr Willy Wonka,
I am writing to you because I would love to go to your factory. I only get one bar a year and my
family save up all their money just for that one bar also I relish the bar to the last crum .If I
went to your Factory it would be a amazing experience.Every day I jog past your Factory to
go to school and I stop and smell your chocolate bar,s.
Yours Sincerely Charlie Bucket
M. r Willy Wonka
1 Chocolate
Cocoa shire
CHO 3RA
Dear Mr Willy Wonka,
I am writing to you because I Love your chocolate and I would love to visit your factory it is huge and stunning.I walk to past fore school the smell of melted chocolate fills the ear I am your biggest fan .We could make crazy flavour and chocolate mousse and bubble gum to.
By Charlie Bucket
Fantastic work Rosie check your spelling and next time try not to use I all the time.
Great work Rosie try not to use I all the time.
1Chocolate avenue
Cocoa shire
CHO 3EE
Dear Mr Willy Wonka,
I am Charlie Bucket and I would love to go to your Chocolate Factory because I have been dreaming about it every single day.My family are not wealthy at all.They save their money until we can afford something to keep us going.Do you know I could help you with some new creations!Also I am your biggest fan.We will make a great team together at your Factory of Wonders.One more thing to tell you is I relish the one bar I get a year.
I will keep your recipes a secret because it is your belonging.Also It makes my mouth water like Mad. It looks like a chocolate wonderland,better than any other place in the world.I can’t wait to go.I’ll be a lucky boy if I do.Finally I will do anything you want me to do and you can’t get a better place than your chocolate Factory.
Yours sincerely Charlie Bucket