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Sword and Sworcery Quest By Josh
Chapter 1
Once upon a time there was a girl called Ally she was on a quest to find a man to kill. Ally was a knight she had a guard dog to fight beside her. Ally knew that you can learn a new power If you vanquish the horrible man. Many people say that when you learn the power you are invincible.but are you?
Ally said to herself “where am I” so she wondered and wondered where she was but then she found out she was in her quest to kill a man. Ally has never been on dangerous quest before the only quest she has been on is to kidnap someone. Ally walked on to found that horrible man a few moments later Ally found a slobbering beast with the head of a snake and a body of a crocodile. Later on Ally found a mysterious gate so she slashed it down with her mighty sword. When she trudged through the gate she saw a cottage with a woodcutter next to it. Ally sneaked up to him and asked him “do you know where to found a horrible man with a reaper mask on” the woodcutter replied “yes of course I with lead you to him”
“Thank you” Ally said.
The woodcutter and Ally and the sythians guard dog moved on. They mysteriously found a head of a rock man, Ally said to herself “this doesn’t look pleasant”.
Chapter 2
Days later a terrible storm covered the land of Scythia. People were afraid of the evilness in the misty darkness. Villages were rushing for there life’s because they’ve never witnessed this horrific problem for decades.
Ally finds out that it’s the power the megatome has created in the deathless spectres own hands. Ally said to herself“I have to take that Powerful piece from that terrible nightmare that no one knows about.
Chapter 3
The Deathless Spectre was risen again by Scythias curse. The Deathless Spectre finds the woodcutter the wood cutter does not know anything about the curse. Back at Scythia, a woman was crying on a bench. She was crying because her son and her husband had been swallowed hole by a mysterious shadow while she was at the market. Luckily the woman did not look at the shadow (Deathless Spectre). Ally was wondering if the shadow was the Deathless Spectre but the villages would not believe her. Like a bullet, Ally ran to the woman on the bench and said” don’t worry about your son and husband I’ll vanquish the shadow so you can live your life like you did 30 minutes ago” the woman replied ” oh thank you thank you ally ” ”
“No problem”Ally replied. Suddenly, Ally realised that the wood cutter was not helping her so she pulled out her mega tome and red the wood cutters mind he was thinking if he could trick Ally by being on the Deathless Spectres army.
Chapter 4
Weeks later the sky turns into a misty darkness again the villages asked Ally “what is going on? Ally replied saying “it’s a sign of the Deathless Spectre”the villages screamed and vanished into there unsafe homes. Suddenly, the Deathless Spectre in a strike of lightning was face to face with Ally.
The Deathless Spectre tried to suck Ally into his body but Ally instantly used the power of sworcery to close his body so he is attack less. Ally said to the Deathless Spectre “you are now not going to be able to take people’s souls”. The Deathless spectre crouched down and said “I was only taking peoples souls because I was scared of this village. Ally walked away from the deathless Spectre, but that was the beginning of the deathless spectres plan. Ally knew what was going on so she used every last bit of sworcery that she had so the deathless spectre would burn. The deathless spectre hovered across the doomed concrete ground and instantly melted into a black steamy poodle. Ally looked up into the sky and saw a army of deathless spectres Ally said to herself “oh no”. The deathless Spectre said never kill a deathless spectre. It seems that if you kill a deathless spectre they will duplicate into a pack said Ally. After that Ally was sucked into the body of the deathless spectre…
Sword & Sorcery Quest Myth
Chapter 1
Once in a land called Scythian there was a young boy called Hurculies One day he met a dog called rusty. Rusty ran away. Hurculies shouted come back but it kept on running so Hurculies ran after him. He found herself In a large forest with tweeting birds and unknown beasts he kept on following the dog and found a woodcutter. The woodcutter noticed her and started talking. She told him that she had just followed a dog through a large steel gate and she needed help so the woodcutter agreed to help and walked with her along the stoney path. Later that day Emily came against a beast and had to fight it or else it would eat her friends. So she went up to the beast and chopped off its legs the beast let out a deafening roar. Emily and her friends covered their ears so she wouldn’t get deafened. As she walked on she noticed a gigantic stone in the shape of a head but it was a dead end. She thought about how to open it she recognised a beautiful rainbow with all the colours you could think of. She looked for the other side of the rainbow and put her sword up then the mouth opened with a clank and a path appeared. As she walked in she was faced by a winding maze. As she walked around the maze she found her self out side the maze. She was so amassed to find her self completing the maze, so she jumped into the air with a cheer.
Chapter 2
A storm covers the land. Scythian hears about the megatome and how to carry out sorcery.As Scythian walked into the ancient chambers of the sorcery book. She walked up the cobwebbed stairs and stood looking down in gladness. Scythian couldn’t pick up the dusty old book because she was worried that she might break it, so she slashed her dark sword through the rotting wood. She quickly put her hands in front of her and cached the book and sighed in relief. Then Scythian walked to the stairs and all of a sudden a huge creature from the underworld came through the dark portal . The huge monster leaped out at her, nearly killing her .The monster had a ragged cloak around its and body and she could see the skeleton’s face. As she remembered what the woodcutter said look out for a monster guarding the book called the deathless spectre. She shouted in terror deathless spectre and ran for her life dodging all of his death traps and minions. She heard a terrible groan and she was safe at last.
Chapter 3
The Deathless spectre released a dreadful storm covering the village. It made the friendly silvan sprits( that are beautiful and there bodies are made from pure life ) hide in the the enchanted and mythical forest. But can only be released by doing a special dance of sorcery, meditating or solving a puzzle.
As well he also released 3 undead birds making a death clock set for two days till doom. However instead of a ticking noise, there was an almost silent noise of a tweet. Tweet. Tweet tweet and if eneybody heard it they would know it would be to late to be saved but can only be broken by deafitind the deathless specter.
Chapter 4
The next morning Sam was terrafied by the distruction of his village so later that day the he held a town meating. “We need to do something about it”said a angry villager.
“Yea” replied a angry villager.
“Dose eneybody want to volunteer to fight him”
“Sam can he’s the one that got us into this mess”
Chapter 5
Later that day Sam set of towards the deathless spectres ruins. He had to go through the enchanted forest with mystical monsters created by the spectre. Words cept on circling his head. “If he fails he will die”
“if he fails HE WILL DIE”
“IF HE FAILS HE WILL DIE!”
“Be quite be quite be quite” shouted Sam hoping.
Sam.
Sorcery Tale
Chapter 1
On a mysterious land lived a world of darkness. As the place (known as mingi taw) grew darker, the trees howling in the greyness. The only thing to be seen was darkness surrounding the place. There was no fun, no games, nothing but darkness itself. There were wolves trying to break the silent and darkness. Where was everyone?
After she woke up,she jumped to her feet and began to explore. On her journey Scarlet came to an unusual field where she met another Scythian girl called Girl. Scarlet seemed puzzled and Girl asked why. Once Scarlet explained, Girl gave her advice which was kind of a puzzle. It took her a long time to find out what the puzzle meant so she carried on exploring. Soon she came to a person called Log fella which showed her the way to the answer to the puzzle. So Scarlet carried on exploring her mystery. Soon she came to a man shaped rock. How mysterious…
As Scarlet approached the man shaped rock, she saw that there was no path leading into it. Suddenly she had a weird feeling in her quivering stomache. It seemed to be realistic. So she slashed her sword out of her side and held it up high and then appeared to be a tongue slithering out of its face. It seemed to be a path leading to a cave. Scarlet creeped slowly towards the tongue, then quickly ran across it. As fast as a blasting bullet, Scarlet ended up face to face with a mysterious character called the Deathless Spectre. Scarlet grabbed the Megatome and bolted away as the Deathless Spectre awoke…
Chapter 2
Like a bullet, scarlet bolted and ran for her life, as the deathless spectre slowly stalked her from every step she took. He seemed to be bloodthirsty for the sorcery trapped inside the Megatome. Eventually Scarlet arrived home to the cottage and found Girl tied up in a inescapable rope with the Deathless spectre guarding her. But he was in the cottage, that was full of sorcery. There seemed to be a blue light surrounding Girl, “The sorcery has captured her from the deathless spectre!” She gasped suddenly. But how will she fight the evil? ” it’s either the sorcery is taken and placed in my hands or she dies!” The deathless spectre cackled menacingly. Scarlet heart sank to her melting guts.
Soon there was a big meeting with the town about who was going to go and defeat the stone hearted beast known as the deathless spectre. ” I ain’t going cos I have ‘orrible kids at home!” One lady shouted. ” I have work to do so I ain’t going! ” an old lady nagged. ” I’ll go.” whispered Scarlet. The entire crowd burst out with laughter as Scarlet raced up the hill with hope in her pounding heart.
Chapter three.
Eventually Scarlet came to the deathless spectre as he was still regaining his power on Girl. ” you’ve came back.” He said expectantly. Suddenly the moon came out as Scarlet swung her sword from her side with the wicked plan in her mind. The moon reflected on her sword and the deathless spectre disappeared in one second. Like a rocket, Scarlet dashed towards Girl and untied her tight ropes. She gasped for air and jumped strait to her feet as she realised that the deathless spectre had been defeated…
Scarlet left Girl to protect the cottage and raced up to the Mayer’s house, banged on his door and let out the great news. ” O my goodness I have to let the villagers know! How did you do it?” He asked suspiciously, ” magic.” Scarlet replied gleefully.
Chapter 4
There was a great big celebration over the death of the Deathless Spectre. Suddenly, there was a beam of light and the good moment had ended. There was panic and fear covering the village, Scarlet remembered all of the Deathless spectre’s power in the Megatome. So she grabbed the Megatome from her bag with her sword in the other hand stretched up and left a huge hole in the centre. The Deathless spectre charging at her menacingly and tore her from the rumbling ground.
She looked around herself all the body’s surrounding the beast. Was this the end of the magical village?
By Nell
Chapter 1
Once up on a time in a mythical place called Scythian, lived a girl. There was a light coming from the sky and then she came to the ground and like a bolt of lightning started to run around to explore the place where she had landed. She didn’t know what she was going to bump into.
Later on, she saw a man standing with some sheep, then she saw a wood cutter cutting wood and he said “can a wood cutter cut wood”? Suddenly he started showing her the way round Scythian.
When she came along some stairs she saw that she was trapped by wolves, so she’ll got her sword out and started killing them they didn’t know that they where going to be killed. When she got away from the beasts she came along to a precipice so she put her sword up in the air and a tong came out of a stone face. She thought she was in a lab because the face could be the face of the person who ones the lab.
As she got further from her home she felt more and more terrified and alone
She wondered why no one was there. “Isn’t any one hear right now?” She asked worriedly. But the reason why their was no one their was because one day in the city their was an evil man that went to a cage and their was a ghostlike figure and he was so mean that he let him out to kill the people in the village. The bad thing was the ghost like figure was a ghost so he wouldn’t be able to die. Someone realised that if you look at the deathless Spector than you will turn to stone one month later so he went to a place where you tell people what has happens and she said “I’ve seen a ghost I have and he looked at me he did I ain’t lying.”no one in the city believed her but they needed to. One month later people realised that the woman had diserpeard so they got worried. A man said who will face their fears to kill the deathless Spector. No one razed their hands. And that’s why no one is in the village. Girl thought to her self why don’t I try to kill the deathless Spector. “I have a sword.”
Chapter two
Resolution
Trembling with fear said to the deathless Spector ” I will be able to kill you so I wouldn’t come any closer.”as she said this she was swallowing like a gorilla finishing its dinner. When she brought the deathless Spector into the light she sore that he was vanishing into the statue. In a flash the statue came to life and started to kill girl but luckily girl jumped up in the air and got her sword and shield out and killed that beast to the blood. She thought that she had won but then her luck turned around she sour the deathless Spector right around the corner. This was the end of her life. She will never se the light of day again.
By Richard
Sword & Sworcery Tale
Opening.
One upon a time in a mythical place called Scythia, the trees danced in the air like a bird flapping its wings. The land was covered in thick black fog. The land was filled with blinding dust however not many people live there so it doesn’t really matter. The ground crumbled as if it had a really bad cough. Hardly any people was in the country because it was so bare.
In Scythia lived a boy named Izuc. He spawned in the middle of the woods. He was covered in armour, he looked like an armadillo. He always made sure he was always behind his dog named Kevin. Kevin had lots of coloured spots like a Dalmatian. In the second scene Izuc meets somebody named Log Fellow. Log Fellow was a hairy and old man. Izuc always followed Log Fellow just like he followed Kevin.
He has a fight with a fury mutt thing. The fury mutt thing ran away in shame and terror. There is a scene were there is a statue of a face and you have to put all the clues together to open the mouth and walk in. There is two scenes before the life ending fight…
Build up.
A thick grey cloud covered the bare land. It started to rain. It rained heavily and gradually turned into a storm. The thunder was as loud as a T-Rex’s roar. The lightning bolts was as long as anaconda. Log Fella told Izuc about the megatome “the megatome is a brown book”. “It has billions of Sworcery inside”. Izuc went to fetch the megatome. On his way he battled a soldier. The soldier was protecting the room that the megatome was in. If you win you enter the room. You use your sword at hit the megatome. He got the megatome. Suddenly he saw two gloomy red eyes stare at him.
Dilemma
The deathless spectre came out of his coffin and stomped. Izuc vibrated. A few minutes past. The deathless spectre started chasing Izuc. Izuc saw a light,he ran into it he turned round and all he could see was the deathless spectres antennae. Strangely the deathless spectre was seen in the village the night after he was killed. He took people’s souls and ate them. He took one family to his coffin and he stabbed knives in the top of the coffin. He opened the coffin and they had dissolved.
Resolution
Izuc throws two swords into the deathless spectres eyes. He disappears into the bright light above. “The deathless spectres gone” he said “he’s gone” Izuc returned to the village and the deathless spectre came down from the sun and said you may of beat me this time but next I’ll kill you and you know I will.
By Connor
Sword and Sworcery tale
Opening
In a land that nobody has heard of, loudness fell and silence was hared.the trees swayed in the cold,calm breeze. The wind sang. The cotton wool clouds floated in the sky. The green heart shaped leaves swayed down from the tall tree, which stands in the middle of field where the sheep chewed on the damp grass.
Sword and Sworcery tale
People thought it was an ordinary place until somebody fell from the sky carrying a sword and a shield. As he came down the steps he held up his sword. Eagerly she walked past a farm and that is where he met an adventurous girl, called Scythian. She quietly said hello, and told him to follow her. She led him to another farm and they saw a woods man called Tom. The girl left him and Tom together.
Build up
Scythian finds out about the megatome. She looks everywhere even in the deepest, darkest and scariest part of the town. Someone walked past and Scythian hears abut of their conversation “hey, ave you eard about the megatome, witch is kept in a cave, on the other side of town.” The strange man mentioned. Scythian ran up the hill and into the library. Nobody knew where the cave was.
A week later Scythian packed her bags and started her journey. Days passed by, weeks even and the was no luck of finding the megatome or the cave.
Scythian was just about to give up and then she spotted the cave. It was not quite as she imagined. The cave was pitch black with a little beam of light shinning through a crack in-between two rocks.
She found the megatome. Desaster came….
Dilemma
The deathless spectre was released from the cold, stone statue. A thunder storm broke out. He followed people for a second or two and then he went strait in and stole every single soul everyones were gone.
More and more people’s souls where being ripped out off their bodies by the evil figure. He took control of spirits and sent them all over the world to kill the the people of Scythia. Scythian when out side off the cave and took a look around her and ran to go and help people to escape. She had a little look over her shoulder and saw the deathless spectre right behind her as if he was her shadow. She had a cold feeling in side her. It is hard to see where everyone is in the dark. Suddenly two sharp eyes appeared in front of her. Shedidn’t have much time to think how to escape.
Resolution
Scythian ran in to the light and looked behind her and the deathless spectre has disappeared. Every one got given their souls back. In the background stood a very strange man. “Hello who are you” Scythian asked
“I’m John but everyone calls me the deathless spectre”…
By Harriet
Wow Hattie this is great. You have really worked hard with that. Well done From Melanie 🙂 !
We’ll done Hats, I’m really enjoying this story and you use enticing words 🙂 xx
From Hattie’s Mum xx
I thought that as well Mrs Brooks! I can’t wait to read your next piece of writing! From Tiffany 🙂
Wow Hattie really good. You’ve thought very hard on this. Hope to see you soon at girls high. From Holly
Sword & sworcery Tale by Alex
Chapter one Arriving.
In an unknown land known as Scythia, The trees would tell tales in the wind. Monsters seemed to live for hundreds of years. The place was always dark and gloomy and never bright and fun. People never knew who to trust. A terrible place! Or was it?
For a while a mythical place called Scythian lived an adventures women called Linda . The strange but clever girl approached an old friendly man wishing she could help him. Like a tambourine, the intelligent man was saying “help me help me!” Scared by what he was saying, she slowly tiptoed to the screaming man. All of a sudden, this dog barked and followed me. “There is an evil women called girl who lives in the dangerous mountains. And again the dog barked so eventually she followed him along this path to find another man. Was he that nasty girl in disguise?
“You will need this sword i give you. He overheard your conversation with that generous old man but just take it you will need it!” A bit more scared now, she wandered up this steep hill. It felt like hours. Out of no where, this object came towards her. It came as quick as a charging bull. She picked up her heavy sword and swiped the strange looking creature. She was shocked. Whilst she was standing in shock the brown dog was barking at me to tell me which way to go. She followed the dog still surprised.
Chapter two going the right way.
Adventurously Linda located an enough small path way. she heard a voice saying “there is a deathless spectre in the dark cave and he can read people’s mind!” Not knowing what to do, she rapidly walked up the steep path. As quick as a ferocious dog chasing sheep, Linda sprinted to the brown dog. Linda suddenly stopped and spotted so much green landscape. Like watching a green alien, Linda stared hypnotised by the green leaves waving at her. When the wind stopped Linda carried on ambling up the hill until she arrived at this Cliff, not knowing what to do she saw this shape what was the exact shape as her sword. Scared of the outcome she put the rusty sword in the small wooden hole. Somehow the rocks moved so she could get across the dangerous cliff. Her and her dog walked through all these dark passage ways until her mind seemed to freeze.
Chapter three Who’s he?
Linda hesitantly walked into this dark and gloomy cave. Not knowing what to do, she adventurously continued her stroll through the many cobwebs. – Out of nowhere an evil laugh echoed around her it was the Deathless spectre.
She didn’t know what to do. So without thinking she just started running back. In fear , Linda ran into a small passageway. where she heard a devastating groan as loud as a wolf howling. Then, the deathless spectre ran through a light. (The deathless spectre was a ghost if he ran through a light he would disappear.) From the sky , a huge object approached me. It pulled out it’s rusty sword and tried to swipe me. I lifted my arm with my bright silver sword in my hand and in one move, I stabbed him and lived another day. Was that the end of the death spectre? What the deathless spectre didn’t know is that Linda took the megaton from the deathless spectre. I could read anyone’s mind!
Chapter 4 on the right tracks.
Linda quickly sprinted back down the hill. Unfortunately the path was blocked by a gigantic bolder . Annoyed by being stopped, Linda liked the green bush and found another small path. With nothing else to do, Linda ran down the path until she found a huge village. She walked down a tiny hill. “Please help us a shady man is killing us all!” Shouted a weird voice. It was the same old man who was shouting earlier at the bottom of the hill. He told me “that this thing is killing us all!” I remembered I had the megatome. As quick as a bullet, I took the megatome out of my bag and used the curious object. He was thinking about when he died Linda new what she had to do. Go to where he died.”you no where he died!” Asked Linda “at the end of the village ain’t he .” Stated the old man. With In a second the old man and the intrigued Linda ran to the grave of the deathless spectre. Roger Baxter. That’s what it stated on the cold grave stone. Out of no where, a object came out of the clouds it was one of the deathless spectre guards. They were specially trained at combat. He had a dagger. I pulled out my sword and killed him. All of a sudden, my heart stopped the deathless spectre what should Linda do?
Chapter 5 attack
Frightened by the object, Linda paused. Her hole life flashed before her. She thought for a minute she was going to die anyway so just try to kill it. Adventurously Linda sprinted for dear life she through the megatome at it. The deathless spectre went into the sky. All of a sudden, a scared man came down from the heavens his name Roger Baxter…
By Alex
A sorceress a tale
Chapter 1
Arriving at Scythian.
It all began when Sapphire,an adventurous girl,went on a dangerous journey to Mingi taw (the two head-shaped Rocky Mountain).The journey began next to a field in the middle of nowhere. Sapphire and a dog Max met a old man on a mossy rock. He said to sapphire and Max that they must save the land from great Evil. Later on Sapphire and Max met a woodsman cutting wood. He said his name was Sam. Sapphire asked and asked the man if he would help them get to Mingi taw. Eventually, Sam gave up,grabbed some food and set off with Sapphire and Max.
Nearly half way, Sapphire became face to face with a three eyed wolf with blood all over it,fearing for her life she grabbed her sword and stritked for the heart and slowly but painfully it died.It hit the ground like a rag doll,lifeless.So Sam, Sapphire and Max carried on their Journey to Mingi taw.
Hopefully they will survive.
Chapter 2.
The mystery village.
On the journey they found a cat.with out hesitation max tried to prance on it but it ran away.So max ran away too after it.We ran after him we found him,as still as a stuff bear,at the side of a village.We ran to the first villager we saw and asked her where is Mingi taw.”why on earth would you want to go there.”She Tolled me as she pointed at a mountain.”to get the megatome from the deathless Spector.”I tolled her.”oh no no no you shouldn’t go there the first time we heard of him was Christmas it was snowing the wind blowing wild.We came running out to a loud scream from mrs apple.”I saw a shadow swallowed my husband hole I did.”She shouted.
“She’s gone crazy oh don’t hurt me deathless Spector.”He laughed in starcazim.
“No ones heard of mr apple or mrs apple again.”she explained.”It was the deathless Spector’s work.”
“Well I best be off then I’ll see you shortly.”Sapphire said hopping it could be true.It would be one in a million chance to come back,well alive.
Chapter 3
Encounter with deathless Spector.
Finally Sapphire had arrived.The cave was dark and gloomy.It stunk of rotten flesh.
She saw the megatome from across silent cave.Sapphire stepped forward and became face to face with,well at first she thought it was a,statue.She looked around the cave piles and piles of cloths everywhere.suddenly she grabbed for her sword slowly and cut the book out of the Deathless Spector’s statue hands.suddenly sparks bust out from the side of the statue.
They disappeared in the middle of the cave.Then the statue woke up and began to chase
Sapphire so she ran to a real statue.suddenly the Spector disappeared into the statue.They began to fight.Sapphire leapt at the Spector and plunged him to his death.All that was left was a pile of black rags.
She ran as fast as she could too the log fellas humble house and gave him the book.”Free cheers for Sapphire hip hip hooray.””Sapphire the hero.”
So Sapphire didn’t only found out how to use a shield and a sword she found out how to use…
….sorcery.The epic begin to an epic end.
The sword tale
Opening
In a land of darkness the moon shone brightly. The only light in the land. The wind blew the swaying trees. The terrible thunder storm covered the land. It will always be black because…
Sally landed on a rocky path. As Sally tiptoed onwards she saw a dog but it was not a normal dog it looked like it was made of blocks. Sally looked all around her but all she could see is the darkness. After a Long walk Sally saw some steps, she went up and saw someone chopping wood. When Sally got there the mysterious man stop and looked at Sally. The darkness around her was too dark for the man to see her but the man was the woodcutter. So he carried on working. Sally walked on the path again until she saw a cave.
The entrance of the cave was dark and gloomy. Sally was a bit scared. The cave was dark that Sally couldn’t see anything. The cave was a gigantic. The walls were winkle like a old granny hand. The path was as narrow as timberland road. When Sally gazed in she saw a statue. It looked like a prince.
Build up
Sally walked into the dark gloomy cave. The walls were just so old and wrinkly like all the other cave she been in. In front of her was a statue and in front of the Statue was the book the wood copper told Sally to get. When she stepped forward the statue came to life…
Sally was shaking with fear. The wood chopper warned Sally about the monster. Sally was thinking how can a statue came to life? She was terrified. Sally made the hardest choice of her life take the book and run…
Dilemma
And so it was told, the deathless spectre had swallowed children souls. The mothers were upset and also the villagers were terribly worried. Maybe they were next. The next day more children souls were taken. This time an old lady’s husband was killed. ” Harry Harry were are you come on your scaring me now Harry!” Screamed one of the lady’s.
“It’s not like this deathless spectre took them is it.” Said this boy in the crowd.
The other people know it was there turn. Every day more and more people die all from the deathless spectre. The old lady was speechless she didn’t say a single thing to anyone.
Sally know she had to do something. She volunteer to go and fight the deathless spectre. ” good bye mother, see you soon.” She said in a confinton voice. She walk out the door and started her journey.
After a long walk Sally finally reach Scythian she walk along the rocky path to the cave. At the end of the village. She heard an aerie sound that would send shives down the back for any one who heard it.
Resolution
The deathless spectre was on the loss again taking people souls and start taking people heart.
Sally went to the deathless spectre cave while he was gone but there was a problem there was guards at the entrance. The only way to kill the deathless spectre is to get the mega tomb. But if she can’t get the megatomb how could she kill the deathless spectre.
Sally got her sword and shied out and walk up to the guards. They got out there sword and they started fighting. Sally was tying her best to win. The guards were to good for Sally so she put the shield in front of her and stop the fight. The guard weren’t having it and the fight went on. Sally knew she could do it. After a few minutes she knock on down and one to go. Five minutes gone and she still fighting. Ten minutes later she knock down both of the guards and ran inside to get the megatomb.
Half an hour later
She was at the cottage and then the deathless spectre was coming towards her. She open the book and all the magic spell came out and killed the deathless spectre. Everyone who died came back a summer came. The trees came out all the flower came up.
Ending
In the land of light everyone was having a picnic out side. Not worrying about the deathless spectre. They were enjoying there time for once and for ever. It was a village of peace.
The EndSword pupil March 24, 2014 at 3:09 pm
The sword tale
The sword tale
Opening
In a land of darkness the moon shone brightly. The only light in the land. The wind blew the swaying trees. The terrible thunder storm covered the land. It will always be black because…
Sally landed on a rocky path. As Sally tiptoed onwards she saw a dog but it was not a normal dog it looked like it was made of blocks. Sally looked all around her but all she could see is the darkness. After a Long walk Sally saw some steps, she went up and saw someone chopping wood. When Sally got there the mysterious man stop and looked at Sally. The darkness around her was too dark for the man to see her but the man was the woodcutter. So he carried on working. Sally walked on the path again until she saw a cave.
The entrance of the cave was dark and gloomy. Sally was a bit scared. The cave was dark that Sally couldn’t see anything. The cave was a gigantic. The walls were winkle like a old granny hand. The path was as narrow as timberland road. When Sally gazed in she saw a statue. It looked like a prince.
Build up
Sally walked into the dark gloomy cave. The walls were just so old and wrinkly like all the other cave she been in. In front of her was a statue and in front of the Statue was the book the wood copper told Sally to get. When she stepped forward the statue came to life…
Sally was shaking with fear. The wood chopper warned Sally about the monster. Sally was thinking how can a statue came to life? She was terrified. Sally made the hardest choice of her life take the book and run…
Dilemma
And so it was told, the deathless spectre had swallowed children souls. The mothers were upset and also the villagers were terribly worried. Maybe they were next. The next day more children souls were taken. This time an old lady’s husband was killed. ” Harry Harry were are you come on your scaring me now Harry!” Screamed one of the lady’s.
“It’s not like this deathless spectre took them is it.” Said this boy in the crowd.
The other people know it was there turn. Every day more and more people die all from the deathless spectre. The old lady was speechless she didn’t say a single thing to anyone.
Sally know she had to do something. She volunteer to go and fight the deathless spectre. ” good bye mother, see you soon.” She said in a confinton voice. She walk out the door and started her journey.
After a long walk Sally finally reach Scythian she walk along the rocky path to the cave. At the end of the village. She heard an aerie sound that would send shives down the back for any one who heard it.
Resolution
The deathless spectre was on the loss again taking people souls and start taking people heart.
Sally went to the deathless spectre cave while he was gone but there was a problem there was guards at the entrance. The only way to kill the deathless spectre is to get the mega tomb. But if she can’t get the megatomb how could she kill the deathless spectre.
Sally got her sword and shied out and walk up to the guards. They got out there sword and they started fighting. Sally was tying her best to win. The guards were to good for Sally so she put the shield in front of her and stop the fight. The guard weren’t having it and the fight went on. Sally knew she could do it. After a few minutes she knock on down and one to go. Five minutes gone and she still fighting. Ten minutes later she knock down both of the guards and ran inside to get the megatomb.
Half an hour later
She was at the cottage and then the deathless spectre was coming towards her. She open the book and all the magic spell came out and killed the deathless spectre. Everyone who died came back a summer came. The trees came out all the flower came up.
Ending
In the land of light everyone was having a picnic out side. Not worrying about the deathless spectre. They were enjoying there time for once and for ever. It was a village of peace
From Milly
Wow Millie I love the story from Lauren
Wow Milly. I like how you put ‘it was a village of peace’ 🙂
WOW! Milly that is an epic story! Can’t wait to read your next piece of writing in the blog! Well done!
Leslie’s sorcery tale
Chapter 1
Once upon a time in a mystic land where the not even the birds felt like tweeting there lived a girl called Lucy. She loved exploring and often met people by roaming around. Her home land was rather big and beautiful.One day she went on a mission because she figured that the land had a dark secret.
When she reached her first destination, (in a graveyard) she saw a woodcutter chopping some wood so Lucy asked him to guide her to the Mingi taw. On their journey, they found a horrid creature that looked as evil as a devil and as scary as a troll and it looked a bit like a dog only very dark. After she had concurred the worlds worst nightmare she went to mingi taw.
Chapter 2
As the wind slapped her face, she ventured on into the epic cave.Surprised by the amount of darkness surrounding her,she stared in disbelieve.Trying to seek out some light she started to mutter to herself ” why do I have to do this?” Constantly.As she reached out to grab the mega tome everything seemed silent,creepy and mysterious.knowing that she was in danger,she stared intently.
Chapter 3
She had just realised that she had unlocked that certain dark secret…
Reaching silently,Lucy snatched the mega tomb. Without hesitation Lucy watched the mystic creature come alive and then she ran for her life!
As quick as lighting,she bolted out of the dark and gloomy cave.
As she was walking home she saw out of the corner of her eye people running and screaming’ the deathless spectre is back!’ That very same day the old man that she saw dropped dead most people think that he died of old age. Lucy thought different.Lucy thought he was murdered that he was killed in action…
After 24 hours of resting in bed Lucy felt wide awake. She went to investigate at the house that the man died in but she found nothing so they said that they would rest there case.Every day since then people dropped dead! She knew that the deathless spectre was behind all of this…
Wow Alex I love the story. From Melanie
Sword & Sworcery Tale
By Lauren
Chapter 1
In a calm and peaceful city, called Scythia, there was a small forest in the centre. The tree was like it was a dolphin swimming side to side trying to find its family and its friend. The leaves were whispering to each other.
Girl, who was a Scythian, liked adventures in damp and dark places. She set off on her adventure on a very hot day. She came across a Shepherd. The Shepherd was surrounded by white fluffy sheep that were all hungry for grass. After talking to the Shepard, Girl strolled off following the path that lay ahead thinking what will happen and who will she meet next.
Girl and her dog found a hut with a skeleton on the top like a warning, but that didn’t stop them from going in. When they got inside all they found was a cosy fire place that warmed the hut up. Above the fire was a clock that looked like it had been worn out a few years ago.”I wonder who lived here?,”said Girl to her dog. “If so when did they live here and who with?”
Chapter 2 – Build up
The sky turned dark and black. The hearts of the villagers sank like their hearts were in quick sand. Baget (Girl) knew something was wrong, but what? The ground started to shake and trees shivered in the wind.what was it.? Was it the Deathless Spectre back again? Would we all be in danger?
A black shadow peered infront of Baget. Pulling up her sword, she stared it in the eyes hoping to scare it off.(But she didn’t, all she did was make it madder!!)
Chapter 3 – Dilemma
The dark and gloomy night lay above the Scythian. Mist hovered all around her. She could only see the mist and the darkness of the night. It was like she was in a box, nobody could see the Scythian and the Scythian couldn’t see anyone.
Under the vast and cavernous mountain of Mingi Taw, a cave hid. The air was damp. The Scthian was getting colder and colder. She knew she was being watched, but who by or more importantly what was watching her.She went inside the cave. The Scythian was ambling inside the cave. A black shadow lingered above the Scythian…
Chapter 4 – Resolution
She knew exactly who it was.It was the DEATHLESS SPECTRE!! Fortunately Baget knew that if she killed it, then all the people of Scythia would be saved. She had to do this because it was her falt that the deathless spectre was released.
Wow Lauren. Very creative with your writing. Keep it up! 🙂
Sword & Sworcery
By Holly
Chapter 1 – Opening
One moon lit night, a person appeared out of a beam of light. Her kind were known as Scythians for they lived in this tranquil land she wondered where she came from and then she remember one thing her mother put a note in her sheld, saying that she was one mission to defeat the deathless specter. As she gazed across a war-ravaged land, a friendly dog suddenly ran to her as if by magic.
The sheep peacefully grazed in the field, meanwhile a unusual girl stood watching them who roams the land. Who was she?
To the surprise of others, it turned out that her name was girl a very unwelcoming name I know, but I don’t make up the rules. On a rock was a large mysterious gate, with iron bars and a patterned symbol carved on top of the gate. “What did it mean?” She thought to herself. Looming over the Scythia, tall trees swayed in the wind like a monster was thumping the ground in despair. The wind howled. The storm ravaged. The thunder roared. The ground shook. The town sat about all cheery like nothing was about to transpire. Joy thought about the clues, which could only add up to… “No it can’t be it has to be something else, could it?” She whispered to her.
Chapter 2 – Build Up
As the Scythian carried on in her woeful journey, she found an cottage and a well. In side the cottage was a lit fire therefore that meant some one had been there before her…
Chapter 3 – Dilemma
After time, the unfortunate Scythian reached the dark and gloomy Cave. She stopped, meanwhile a shiver ran down her spine. It was as if something bad was about to happen. She passed an ominous statue with fire in its eyes glaring straight through her. Back in Scythia the sky darkened, a storm raged and people hurried back inside. That very night Joy, the Scythian, came back from the gloomy cave, grasping the megatome tightly. The hectic crowd consumed joy like a thread on a bobbin. See was very confused at first but then her mind settled and BOOM! The mega tome set it’s self on fire, meanwhile every one stopped and stared. “Finally” some one said enthusiastically “we don’t need to worry about the deathless specter any more”
That very night, an eerie scream echoed across the town.what was it? Or even more important what was it? People trembled in fear but one girl stood up to her to it that was joy she thort that the power of the mega tome could safe her. So she walked in with fear suddenly there was a loud scream her mother fled inside then a sound off a bellow saying get away from her scattered around the naborhood.
Joy’s mother came limping out with her eyes drowning in tears “SHE IS DEAD JOY IS DEAD” every body when’s cowering back into their homes “HE KILLED HER I HAD TO GET MY REVENGE” Then the town cheered with happiness joy’s mother still weeping on the floor at that moment a reassuring hand reached out to her “mother?” “What is wrong?”