Class 3 at Walcott have been writing their own fantasy stories. Have a read of their first drafts for their dilemma. In the dilemma, the main character enters the fantasy world. Afterwards, the main character meets a guide to the fantasy world (who warns them of an evil character). Finally,  the main character finds out about the horrible things the evil character is doing in the fantasy world.
Parrots – Steps to success:

• Use good openers.
• Try to excite the reader.
• Include powerful verbs and adverbs.
• Use similes, metaphors and personification to describe the fantasy world.
• Use interesting descriptions for the characters.
• Include speech and speech marks.
• Use short sentences for dramatic effect!
• Include a complex sentence.
• Write in paragraphs.

Snow Leopards & Rabbits – Steps to success:

• Use good openers.
• Try to excite the reader.
• Include powerful verbs and adverbs.
• Use similes and personification to describe the fantasy world.
• Use interesting descriptions for the characters.
• Include speech for the characters.
• Use short sentences for dramatic effect!
• Include a compound sentences (try a complex sentence).
• Write in paragraphs.

Golden Eagles & Dogs- Steps to success:

• Describe the moment the main character finds the gateway.
• Include powerful verbs and adverbs.
• Use a simile to describe the fantasy world.
• Use short sentences for dramatic effect!
• Use capital letters and full stops.
• Use connectives to link your ideas.

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